5.4.10

Teaser Tuesday

I am posting my teaser a little bit early because I might not get a chance to post it tomorrow. This is from my YA Dystopian As the World Burns and just to let you know, I just wrote it ten minutes ago, so it is really really rough.

It was one of those scenes that I had to get down so I wouldn't forget it. Enjoy.


*SNIPPPETY SNIP*

12 comments:

  1. Cool story. Reminds me of A Handmaid's Tale. I like the description of Elder Diane. This is a great rough draft!

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  2. Love this, probably a lot more than V did! ;)

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  3. Love your descriptions!! <3

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  4. I was thinking the exact same thing that Cory said! Cool idea...can't wait to see more!

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  5. YEZZ, my fellow Dystopian Diva! So glad you've decided to ressurect this one cuz it's good, really good.

    Poor Tom! Hope he really is out there!

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  6. OMG, I love this. It's heartbreaking and it makes my curious mind want to know more.

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  7. Thanks for reading guys! Your comments always make me smile. <3

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  8. Awesome! Love the conflict going on here...sad for your MC!

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  9. Oh wow, this is amazing, a very intense scene. Well done!

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