5.4.10

Teaser Tuesday

I am posting my teaser a little bit early because I might not get a chance to post it tomorrow. This is from my YA Dystopian As the World Burns and just to let you know, I just wrote it ten minutes ago, so it is really really rough.

It was one of those scenes that I had to get down so I wouldn't forget it. Enjoy.


*SNIPPPETY SNIP*

12 comments:

corrinejackson said...

Cool story. Reminds me of A Handmaid's Tale. I like the description of Elder Diane. This is a great rough draft!

V.M.Pettingill said...

Love this!!

Glen Akin said...

Love this, probably a lot more than V did! ;)

Becca said...

Love your descriptions!! <3

Karla Nellenbach said...

I was thinking the exact same thing that Cory said! Cool idea...can't wait to see more!

Krista Ashe said...

YEZZ, my fellow Dystopian Diva! So glad you've decided to ressurect this one cuz it's good, really good.

Poor Tom! Hope he really is out there!

Kaitlin Ward said...

Wow, this is awesome!

Marilyn Almodovar said...

OMG, I love this. It's heartbreaking and it makes my curious mind want to know more.

Raven said...

Thanks for reading guys! Your comments always make me smile. <3

Jamie B said...

Very cool. :)

Debra Driza said...

Awesome! Love the conflict going on here...sad for your MC!

deltay said...

Oh wow, this is amazing, a very intense scene. Well done!