Teaser Tuesday
I am posting my teaser a little bit early because I might not get a chance to post it tomorrow. This is from my YA Dystopian As the World Burns and just to let you know, I just wrote it ten minutes ago, so it is really really rough.
It was one of those scenes that I had to get down so I wouldn't forget it. Enjoy.
It was one of those scenes that I had to get down so I wouldn't forget it. Enjoy.
*SNIPPPETY SNIP*
12 comments
Cool story. Reminds me of A Handmaid's Tale. I like the description of Elder Diane. This is a great rough draft!
REPLYLove this!!
REPLYLove this, probably a lot more than V did! ;)
REPLYLove your descriptions!! <3
REPLYI was thinking the exact same thing that Cory said! Cool idea...can't wait to see more!
REPLYYEZZ, my fellow Dystopian Diva! So glad you've decided to ressurect this one cuz it's good, really good.
REPLYPoor Tom! Hope he really is out there!
Wow, this is awesome!
REPLYOMG, I love this. It's heartbreaking and it makes my curious mind want to know more.
REPLYThanks for reading guys! Your comments always make me smile. <3
REPLYVery cool. :)
REPLYAwesome! Love the conflict going on here...sad for your MC!
REPLYOh wow, this is amazing, a very intense scene. Well done!
REPLY