tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2387024755217606129.post5725358788465835950..comments2015-06-17T18:01:00.398-07:00Comments on Love Letters to Forever: Teaser TuesdayRaven Mhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03538947519732493635noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2387024755217606129.post-69001403305320210092012-05-09T06:51:43.260-07:002012-05-09T06:51:43.260-07:00This was so heartbreaking to read =( I do want to ...This was so heartbreaking to read =( I do want to read more, though!Stephanie Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01258321385403403810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2387024755217606129.post-77207965825100530402012-04-24T14:27:13.287-07:002012-04-24T14:27:13.287-07:00LOVE this snippet, Raven. I noticed you changed te...LOVE this snippet, Raven. I noticed you changed tenses and I wish there was more description, especially with Krispin's armor. I want to get a feel for it - what does it sound like/look like? Is it clunky and loud? Is it heavy? What designs are on it, etc? <br />But this snippet has really strong emotions and I can't wait to read another snippet soon :)Rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18076907708483883575noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2387024755217606129.post-32684138026761706212012-04-24T13:25:04.222-07:002012-04-24T13:25:04.222-07:00Aw, man, heartbreaking to hear her once-dad call h...Aw, man, heartbreaking to hear her once-dad call her a "beast" :( You have some great description and emotion in here. <br /><br />Just a small note that you change tenses partway through this excerpt.Sagehttp://sagelikethespice.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com